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Okay so this is still a work in progress but I feel like I might be on the right track! Advice is welcome! https://www.lavandulastudios.com/home-copy/

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Donny Granger
Donny Granger
11 févr. 2025
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Thanks for sharing Ali! looks like you have an amazing team!


I'm sure the site is doing really well for you guys. There are a lot of beautfiul images for couples to get excited about.


first impression

  • it's really hard to have a main storyline when the business is comprised of four or five different photographers.

  • i wonder if you'd be comfortable cutting about 80% of the header slider

  • the slider feels overewhelming when i look down and see the 1/66 number. choose the ones that really evoke the right emotion and put the rest somewhere else.

  • what do you think the main, overarching story is (problem/solution/result) is for your brand? it would be what each of your team falls under, so their unique personality would have to be contained within it - so it's a lofty umbrella.


you have a killer business! I think there is so much potential here!

well done!

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