Website revamp
Hey STV fam! I've really been enjoying this week's assignments!
I used today to finally tackle redoing my website. I think it truly made a huge difference going through and intentionally removing and adding things. I would love any feedback if you get the chance to take a look! I'm my own worst critic so would love some fresh eyes. Hope you're all having a lovely week! 🤗
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It's beautifu! - but.... I think you can handle a little MORE, LOL
-- the top is stunning!
I really want to get into whatever story you tell.
FOR THE WILDLY IN LOVE... -- WOW! LOVE THAT!
you start with a section about how. you want to be their friend, be close, in order to get the good stuf..
That's an AWESOME storyline - help it be more clear!
1 - give that section a better lead in
instead of saying (LASTING MEMORIES THROUGH TIMELESS BREATHTAKING IMAGERY) (that sounds kinda vanilla), say something interesting
ideas;
A Friend Takes Better Images
Imagine if a close friend was also able to create breathtaking images
Friends don't let friends take boring photos
play with your voice -- but with a phrase like "for the wildly in love", you are free to play!
Then,
make sure your images feel close and personal. you can show other stuff later, but make sure all of the images on the home page feel super close, intimate, emotional, etc.
you're killin it!