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I spent alittle more time updating and changing some wording. Would love feedback on how the story line is now. Mercedesrainphotography.com
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I spent alittle more time updating and changing some wording. Would love feedback on how the story line is now. Mercedesrainphotography.com
your site is lovely!
Great work
constructive feedback, besides all the good stuff:
might have a bit too many words too soon.
you could consider breaking the intro paragraph up into key phrases and introduce the ideas in sections of the homepage. each section could have two or three images to help it connect.
make sure all of your images, words, and testimonials are telling the story of DOCUMENTOR if that's what you want to be selling.
It's okay to have a couple of epic images/portraits - but the more you can stay on the feel of Documentor with the imagery, the better that will resonate.
If you find yourself wanting to show posed images and talk about how you relate to clients over time, then feel free to adjust from Documentor to Relator - it's okay to 'find yourself' over the seasons.