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I have come back to this and adjusted it just about every hour today ๐ trying to niche down and be as specific as I can in one line. Not sure I am there yet, but this feels as close as I've been all day-any and all advice welcome!!!

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This is reeeaaallllllllly good.
you are on the right track -- show it to a couple of friends and ask them if it moves them. show it to a super-smart writer friend and ask for polish. show it to a past bride that you love and ask what they think - change or add anything?
you're doing great!